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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
NICE!

Loved it! The story, the writing, all of it!

Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Nicely done

Very impressive.

ed3363ed3363over 10 years ago
story

strange little story, very personal and touching. She sounds like she could be finding ways to push you away when she starts to feel to close. You seem to have some feelings towards her. Maybe you both have a chance for lasting happiness.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Excellent

This story line would make a superb novella.

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unknownmuseunknownmuseabout 6 years ago
Perfection

Absolute perfection.

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I'm a Portland, Oregon-based, frequently touring songwriter/musician. I also write essays, do podcasting, and occasionally write erotica. You can find me on FetLife as Choto.