by SomewhatLiterateGoblin
It's just too short, there's no way to have everything required in a lite erotica in 2 pages, neither of the ones you made had enough meat(metamorphically. I'm not saying more dicks) for me to really ever want to read a third
Not sure about the story so far but: "a small one-eyed goblin named, Nutten Sak." was hilarious.