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by Middleagepoet

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Unfinished

I gave it a 50 as the story was well writen but I kept asking myself "SO". There seemed to be no purpose other than relate an incident. The harmonica should have generated more story. But well writen, thank you.

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