All Comments on 'Harmony'

for once the female lead isnt a complete dimwit

good job (:

Well written love and lust story. In the event someone says you didn't develop Liam's character enough, they are wrong. My take on it is that you limited our knowledge of him; made him virtually one dimensional, as Ava initially viewed him. Declaring his love publicly was a nice touch at the end. Thank you.

Beautifully written, great character development, captures the complexity of Ava's personality and dilemma. You are a talented, knowing writer.

good story thank you

Not much more to say. Thank you.

Very well-written. Excellent use of dialogue, believable and effective. Sweet and subtle in turns. A step above most of the other entries, this piece shows real talent and skill.

God luck. I hope you do well; you deserve to.

The reverse of how a relationship usually begins, but hey--in the end, it all worked out.

An uncommonly good romantic story, with some hot sex thrown in for good measure. It doesn't get much better than that.

Thanks for posting.

Beautiful story!! Thank you!