by chris99999
Very nice characterization, I also love how you used descriptive words in the story. My only wish is that the story was longer and had more build up to the eventual sex; to me it seemed to easy for him.
Well done, right length and it flowed well after a bit of a common start.
I thought the twist was going to be getting caught and anne saying she was pleased they were getting along OK.
I loved this story for a number of reasons. Having had a somewhat related event occur in my first marriage, I could relate to the emotions. Hope to see more family adventures for this threesome
good story, would have liked him o collect on the bet. you couldve made this a series very easily. wish you did.
Awesome.......................
I really enjoyed it and thank you for being so humane and authentic.
I'm waiting for the next one.