All Comments on 'Harry and the Stupid Bet'

by chris99999

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Absolutely loved it!

woodwardwoodwardalmost 3 years ago

Nice twist at the end.

ArkusRuksulArkusRuksulalmost 3 years ago

Very nice characterization, I also love how you used descriptive words in the story. My only wish is that the story was longer and had more build up to the eventual sex; to me it seemed to easy for him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Worth every penny

Tc

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Well done, right length and it flowed well after a bit of a common start.

I thought the twist was going to be getting caught and anne saying she was pleased they were getting along OK.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great. Nice ending.

MoondancerNYMoondancerNYalmost 3 years ago

I loved this story for a number of reasons. Having had a somewhat related event occur in my first marriage, I could relate to the emotions. Hope to see more family adventures for this threesome

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

good story, would have liked him o collect on the bet. you couldve made this a series very easily. wish you did.

jay1459jay1459almost 3 years ago

Great story - perfect ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Awesome.......................

I really enjoyed it and thank you for being so humane and authentic.

I'm waiting for the next one.

CarieMetoBedCarieMetoBedover 1 year ago

Good story from start to finish. Very Hot!

FeltfixerFeltfixer4 months ago

It was good but the seduction was too essy and quick, I feel

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Well educated and interested in lots of things. All my stories are 100% fiction. They are the result of a dirty mind and a vivid imagination.