All Comments on 'Harry's App Ch. 01: Lockdown'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Awesome; I hope for a sequel

AlinaXAlinaXabout 4 years agoAuthor

In which Harry's mum figures out what happened to her and gets her revenge?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Amazing. Perhaps there's a hot neighbour girl around his age for him to visit

AlinaXAlinaXabout 4 years agoAuthor

sexymomma57: ta! :-)

Anon #3: Maybe - I mean, I'm sure there is, but what to do with her?

Anon #2: Let's assume there was a helpful adjustment to the spine. Let's also assume the son isn't the most adult of twenty-year-olds. Let's further assume his mother doesn't have the benefit of hindsight. Finally, have you ever made bolognese? Because I have. A lot. (Not, fair enough, with huge, bare breasts.) I don't remember ever having the oil so hot it spits in the way you suggest. Now, steak, on the other hand... would not be clever.

AlinaXAlinaXabout 4 years agoAuthor

Music to my ears...

RyanrahlRyanrahlalmost 4 years ago
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Since i commented on another of your stories, i wanted to praise this one. Its well paced and the tension and relief is well placed. Bravo.

AlinaXAlinaXalmost 4 years agoAuthor

Heh. Glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting... :-)

Mael99Mael99over 3 years ago
Hot

This would be much easier to read if it wasn't written in 1st person.

Still very hot, though.

AlinaXAlinaXover 3 years agoAuthor

I know some people aren't fans of first person, but I generally prefer it, and here it was chosen deliberately. Mind Control victims are usually reduced to ciphers, and I wanted to play with that.

Thanks for commenting!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Lovely story. I wish it was longer. Maybe the quarantine could be lifted and son could have friends over and maybe take mom to a Adult book store to pick-up a little spending money. I know I'm bad. Giggles.

sammieflagonsammieflagonover 1 year ago

I think the comment below is great. He needs to share mom with other's.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loved it. Soon got me hard and leaking

zena99zena99over 1 year ago

What a loving mother. She is amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I know it's been a minute, but I literally return to this story over and over, and for one small reason: I cannot get the scene out of my mind, where mom tries again to confront, but Harry asks her to sit on him first, and she complies without a thought. Such a hot moment! I only wish that it would have been extended. Like if she went on a lecture, and he escalated touching, and him asking probing questions while probing her. My incest fetish aside, that would be an instantly faved story for me regardless. You're so good, though. Thx

lexlogan8lexlogan84 months ago

Love the story, love the first person point of view.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

gotta love those mothers that submit to wearing stockings. harry is one lucky nylonist fucker

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