by WhattaTrope
Well-written and researched. Can't wait to see if this story continues!! The imagery is used in a fantastic and yet relatable manner!
Congratulations on your unique and masterfully done story! I don't think there's anything else on the site quite like it. Looking forward to great things from you.
Thank you all for your comments!
There is an illustration for the story (if you are interested) at:
https://www.literotica.com/i/scene-from-haunted-hot-tub
This story is truly, truly something. New favorite author. Looking forward to reading more of your work!
I was pleasantly swept up by the jetting currents of this story. Parts of the story, especially the ending, remind me a bit of "The Witching Hour" by Anne Rice.