by Goldeniangel
Your story ended far too quickly! You just gave us a taste of this enjoyable story!
It was amazingly hot for a short story. You should definitely write a sequel!
there are a lot of grammatical errors you should check before submitting and what does this mean "reading to kiss his ghost girl " you wrote it, now explain it?
In the sixties there was a popular song about a guy who spent the night in a haunted house. One of the lines was, "Ain't no haint (sp?) gonna run me off!" I feel the same way about this story. This one, like just about all of your other submissions, is simply awesome! I am continually amazed at your imagination and your story telling is great. If you don't write the next chapter, I will come find you and make a "haint" out of you!! (I'm just kidding, of course.) But I do anticipate the next chapter. JohnT
story held me from the beginning,not the same crap,i felt for her,has the beginng of a great story platform,dependons on were you take it...
Write more! That was interesting, yet very erotic! Great work :)
DO MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOUR AN AWESOME AUTHOR!!!!!!!
CONTINUE! PLEASE!!! :D
Please is it posible for you to continue this? It has some damn fine writing.
Write a sequel, this story has the potential to become a very good novela or even just a small series of erotic stories.
S.N.
I loved ur story pleaze keep going. I would love to read more. please keep writing and ill always leave u good comments. ^_^
by: cat
p.s: i love ya
This is a great story, I'd really like to read more! Another excellent story by one of the most talented authors on the site!!
But then again, I'd expect nothing else coming from you. Very interesting story, I'm looking forward to more.
This was such a fun and lively story as I have read in a long time. By all means write the next part, does he have another visit from her or a new girl.. perhaps she'll stay with him forever??? time will only tell :).