All Comments on 'Haunted Prey Ch. 07'

I love how awkward Alauria is with Raedyn...it's so true to what happens in real life. I hope we find out more about Lindsay's past soon. This series is excellent, I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep writing! :D

Great way to move things along. I love the tension between Alauria and Lindsay. Even demons have insecurities, it seems.

Another great chapter in the series. However, you may want to be more careful of gramatical errors. Keep up the good work and please post again soon.

Love it. Can't wait for more. Keep up the great work.

there were a lot of errors. Wrong words used, spelling mistakes etc. Not nearly as well edited as usual. I found those mistakes very distracting. However, I like the direction the story is going. I feel bad for both of them.

They're back at the manor! Can't wait to get an update on everybody. I feel bad for Lindsay and Alauria...so much tension between them and not the good kind. Looking forward to the next chapter!

I love these stories. Can't wait for more, please post soon.

Very good chapter... your evil, always with te cliffhangers. He called her Rachel, not flattering. Who is the smoking red head w/ that jerk Raife? Is it Rachel? Can't wait for more! Hurry!!!

There were alot more errors present in this chapter. You might want to take it down, clean it up a little and then put it back up.

a few typos the story is GREAT. Keep up the great work,

but i can't help wondering if you typed it out on a 'smart' phone ;P xN