by FeverDreamer
Wtf this has to be the worst story i have ever read do us all a favor and dont write anymore your killing the readers eyes
Wtf this was possiably the worst story i have ever read if not it was defentily 1 of the worst if you have more i for sure as hell hope there better this cause this story says you should not write stories cause damn you suck at it i give it 1 star cause 1 is as low as you can vote
Read this one a while back and then stumbled across it once more. Excellent story.
im the kinda person that reads something and puts myself in the picture of the story i dont mean to sound like an ass or be mean lolz about the whole incest thing to each his/own right. your an awesome story teller thanks for sharing with us
the whole incest thing is kinda creepy to me. you tell it very well once again awesome story i liked part two alot. im the crazy kinda bastard who would do something like this go to a haunted place and shit they seem interesting lmao.
Incestuous sex and horror..two of my favourites..awesome story!
Outstanding story! The worst thing I can think to say is that I feel it was too short! I love the outer limits angle to erotic stories and would love to see how far down the rabbit hole this story can go! Who else can we add to the dark curse that follows them home!?!? Write more pls!
Cheers!
Newtype
Unbelievable! This story was really, really good! I'm not really an ass man, but damn I think I might be now. You should write either a sequel to this or more stories with incest, big tits, big butts, and haunted houses. You did a fine job here.
PLEASE write the next one! I loved this one, its one of my favorites! More incest, possesed kind of things! Really hot!
I would give it the nod for best Halloween story. Hope there is a part 2 some day.
Thanks for writing it.
Hopefully now their relationship will change and maybe next halloween they'll return for a round 2. Thanks.
Well done,and we do need a part two. Give me time to get more KY.
Nothing ruins a story more than a sequel. Leave it as is and move onto something new. Great story.
Great beginning. Since Halloween has yet to come I'm hoping to read more about Tim, mom and their hitchhiker before the big day/night. After all, monsters need a little lovin too. Thanks for the story.