All Comments on 'Haunting Bob Ch. 01'

Well written and an excellent idea :-)

I have never even thought to vote on anything on this site before but I was so engrossed in your story that I needed more, so get busy and add quiet a few more chapters to this story and evolve the state in which Beth finds herself until she disappears or takes on a more solid form with added inputs in line with the Ex and the job and everyday events with a hint of humour. Then send the finiushed article for publishing I'm sure you have the makings of a best seller if you handle it right, possibly even a movie in the making. Lord knows we need something new in the way of story line in the movie industry. Anyway good luck

Bob Davidson

I got so engrossed with your story that I had to read them all in one sitting ;))) Now I'm looking forward to read many many more of them. You have a way with words that is really appealiing.

if this were a movie, it would be blockbuster!

Well-written, great story idea, good plot. definitely an absolutely great story!

This is an excellent story! I can't wait to see the next chapter, so please submit it soon.

The story itself got me so wrapped up I forgot that I was reading it on Literotica. (Lets face it, many of the stories are In Out End...eh?) Good stuff!

Love the couple. Very cute and looking forward to reading the next chapter.

A very interesting concept. it has left me wanting for more! please add more soon!

Very cool my friend. You are a good writer.

A story written with humanly imaginative and captivating impression that lingers on the reader's mind for a long long time afterwards

Great, great concept, great descriptions, storyline, great erotic part, great everything. You're an amazing author since I read your other work as well I have to say you're one of the best and keep it up!