All Comments on 'Haunting of McKay Manor Pt. 01'

That made my Favorite list . Will be watching for chapter 2.

More!

Your getting me hooked on another series?! Paranormal incest.

You have a great imagination. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Poor Johnathan had a suspension at the end? Or was that a suspicion perhaps? The concept of your stories is usually very good, but sometimes I find them hard to read because you use the totally wrong word, or just miss words altogether. Perhaps a bit of proofreading might fix that.

you have way to meany undone stories you need to finish them

Is her son 16 or a adult. It's weird he's referred to as a child being shipped away to his father.

great start more please

Part 2?

Part 2 please!

Wickedly good... Very yummy indeed! Thank you!

Interesting start. Confused lying erotic towards the end. Lots of possibilities in ch 2. Funking with Mom, Jennifer, even Nora ( I read somewhere it's possible to fuck a ghost. Some ghosts have the capacity to form a tangible human body from protoplasms that are in the atmosphere, and if he or she is really horns, can definitely fuck or get funked by a human or animal. I have heard of a male ghost, some sort of a satyr, who had single, lonely woman under mind control and used to come twice a week at dead of night and fuck throughout the night. She was scared of him, she didn't want it, but there was nothing she could do. She had no say in the matter. Then about a year later, all this suddenly stopped and she got back to her normal life. So you can use this in your next chapter or in another of your stories. Good luck.