All Comments on 'Haven Pt. 01'

Well, for the first time I really got into a tickle punishment story. I thought it was first rate so thank you. I would have liked a bit more description of Olivia passing out from laughing so hard and not able to catch her breath. Waking her up would have been a shock to her system as the tickling would have continued. Not sure about the stuff they put on her feet on that first day. They had plenty of time to experiment with a real live prisoner. I liked the geographical and character buildup of the new country. Within one year to have over 7 million females on the island was a fantastic feat and not very believable but ok. I would have been surprised that it would take a year to get someone to break the law so late. Human nature is to take risks and surly someone would do something against some kind of law. Oh well, the story was fun to read. Well done.