All Comments on 'Haven's Wood Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

good and getting better. please keep it going. this is quickly becoming a favorite.

sneakywolf32sneakywolf32almost 11 years ago
spectacular

each chapter keeps getting better and better but why dont you try making them a little longer

ChurosChurosalmost 11 years ago
Thanks for the update

I'm loving your characters especially Katie. It's fun when the siblings are together. Dean is a good addition to the story as well. He balances his mate. Natasha... well, she really had a painful background making this difficult for James. The plot...is starting to feel like other werewolf romance stories out there but it's just the beginning so I hope to see more.

angelicbeautyangelicbeautyalmost 11 years ago

More more... great story plz hurry with the. Nex t chapters

FA_JFFA_JFalmost 11 years ago
Nice continuation

You are building the characters well. Do you plan outside threats to them or will it be only about them coming to terms with each other? Either is good. The build of tension is spot on. James' frustration. Natash's fears and frustration. Both developing steadily without faux drama.

Your writing is stronger each chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Great job so far keep going no matter how long it takes.

willieonewillieonealmost 11 years ago
I'm hooked!

I am enjoying this wonderful story and look forward to reading the rest! Poor James he has been waiting so long to find his mate and his mate is so desperate to feel loved I look forward to my HEA!

southernmisfitsouthernmisfitalmost 11 years ago

The story is getting better and better.

Please update soon!!!! :-))

DazzlerazzleDazzlerazzlealmost 11 years ago

When will you upload the next chapter?

MattigotMattigotalmost 11 years ago
More!

I NEED MORE! Your characters are beginning to develop very nicely. I like the way it is slowly happening, not jumping to claiming as is usual in other stories. That said, can't wait for more chapters. hope there are several.

BighotmommaBighotmommaalmost 11 years ago
Keep Writing

I love the characters, keep writing I cannot wait to find out what happens!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Love this!

I like your story! please keep on writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
getting better and better

you still could slow down some

Stephen J

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