by notmy_realname
good and getting better. please keep it going. this is quickly becoming a favorite.
each chapter keeps getting better and better but why dont you try making them a little longer
I'm loving your characters especially Katie. It's fun when the siblings are together. Dean is a good addition to the story as well. He balances his mate. Natasha... well, she really had a painful background making this difficult for James. The plot...is starting to feel like other werewolf romance stories out there but it's just the beginning so I hope to see more.
You are building the characters well. Do you plan outside threats to them or will it be only about them coming to terms with each other? Either is good. The build of tension is spot on. James' frustration. Natash's fears and frustration. Both developing steadily without faux drama.
Your writing is stronger each chapter.
I am enjoying this wonderful story and look forward to reading the rest! Poor James he has been waiting so long to find his mate and his mate is so desperate to feel loved I look forward to my HEA!
I NEED MORE! Your characters are beginning to develop very nicely. I like the way it is slowly happening, not jumping to claiming as is usual in other stories. That said, can't wait for more chapters. hope there are several.
I love the characters, keep writing I cannot wait to find out what happens!