by Prolonged_Debut10
This novel that you have been writing has been wonderful... I've loved every minute of it.... Don't listen to the barking dogs on what comments they have about your story...
Apparently I'm not the one you're talking about. I've given you fives all along the way because I like your stories, they're entertaining. I still believe you need an editor. I used to write like you do until I got smarter and got an editor, There's a lot of fine people out there who would be glad to help you. douglas569d@aol.com
I have read your other stories and have enjoyed them a lot. I tend to read and then reread stories I like. This is my first read of this particular story and despite what any person who will not name himself you are a very talented writer.
i could hope bermuda is there before i finish
care less about spelling or punctuation,,.
i read there must be some mistake first.
now am into dick and jane sorry slip in spelling lmao
checked order to read them in
Am enjoying this story immensely , am aware of a few imperfections but nobody’s perfect . Totally merits 5 stars
I am on reading binge during this lockout so pardon me if I forget rate your excellent stories. By default they get 4 stars but some of them really rate 5. Oh btw when typing such long stories typos tend to occur so dont bother about trolls taking it out on spellings. Better to look for the meaning in the stories than to tto look out for typos. Thanks for your prodigious output inspite of your medical condition.. I can unddrstand it cos i am a doctor.
While I do enjoy reading this set of stories ... Dyche , somehow , has become both an Asshole and a total Dick ... Money sure went to his Ego .