All Comments on 'Having Kate Ch. 01'

I could visualize everything in your story. I'm married to a curvy woman and had been with several BBW's before marrying. One driving thing though; if this girl is a virgin, why would she be on birth control?

As a lover and appreciator of BBWs, I was really getting into this story. But then you made the mistake that so many writers on here makes: you switched from past tense to present tense. And then back. And then back again. Most times when this happens I go to the end and give one or two stars and quit reading. Not with your story, though. It was very well told except for what I described. That I read the story to the end is a compliment. If it weren’t for this, I would have given this story five stars. I had to only give it four, though. I do look forward to the next installment. Enlisting the assistance of someone to read through your stories with “fresh eyes” could be very beneficial going forward.

Good job!

I am looking forward to the next chapter. Thank you for taking the time to write

Thank you for your comment I am so happy to hear that you were able to visualize everything. I just wanted to point out that women can be on birth control even if they aren't sexually active for several different reasons.

Was a decent story but the constant use of baby was just distracting and annoying.

Looking forward to more stories of Kate.

She's definitely gonna get pregnant! Birth control doesn't work for big girls! And I should know. But regardless I loved your story and the attraction to bigger women. I look forward to reading more.