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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
great romance story

Chapter 2 continues this wonderful love story, set in the exceptionally romantic island of Hawaii. The atmosphere and mood of the story is perfect, and the plot thoroughly engaging. The love scene is well written, and the result is a great romance story

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