All Comments on 'Hayli's "Sliding Door" Ch. 01'

I love it so far and it has me sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next. You are a magician with words, my sweet. Love Hayli

Dragging it out, if the story takes place in the U.S. then the manner of speaking should reflect that, drunk not pissed, room or apartment not flat.

US folk write about the UK it should be in UK English?

I like many US citizens, but some are so fucking xenophobic. Grow up, and realise most of the English-speaking world speaks English, not the US brand.