All Comments on 'He Had Just Started College Pt. 01'

It is a good setup for a story, but there just wasn't really anything there. It would have been better combined into your part 2 and published as a single chapter. Keep writing though. When this gets fully fleshed out (pun intended) it could be really good.

Annoyed the hell out of me. Almost quit the story until I saw a Part 2.