He Lies in Wait

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She slept in his arms.

It was all gone when she awoke on November 1st. Her body was rejuvenated, and normal. No wounds. No nightmare apartment. Couch, returned. No cum-stains on the walls, no blood, and no Murtocke.

Elenore sighed and picked herself up for work. She shed her bitter, heartbroken tears in the shower and returned to her everyday life. Her coworkers remarked on how "well-rested" she seemed, and she was. The burden in her soul had lifted, the chains grown thin and pretty. Everything was fine.

Internally, she was waiting. Waiting as he was, somewhere removed from her, in the underworld.

They both lay in wait to be rejoined.

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RenewerRenewerover 1 year ago

As with all your writings, it was beautifully and so descriptively written that it easily feeds the imagination the pieces needed to paint the picture. So wonderfully and darkly erotic, it hit hard into much CNC, while taking it beyond to places only demonic fantasy could perversely penetrate. Very creative uses of how the body could be used and ravaged, an perfect unholy sex doll in all complete ways. Would love to read more of the before and after, the ending was perfect as well, even showing a type of aftercare for his submissive.

I always find it amusing that those with the worst and most insulting reviews are also the biggest cowards, hiding behind their Anon guard. Petty people who can't critique and must only ridicule are the voices lost in the wind, worth nothing more than their pitiful words.

PhilippaMaQuentePhilippaMaQuentealmost 2 years agoAuthor

Mm, this one was written in keeping with particular themes and ties into an overarching canon of mine, but it's fine if not everyone enjoys it. Not everyone will. I certainly don't ask for everyone to like every single thing I write.

This was labeled erotic horror for a reason.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I usually enjoy these stories. And even I found this one way over the top. I like when it centers around ceremonies with human qualities thrown in and mixed in together. Not animalistic throw everything in but the kitchen sink cause you don't know what else to write.

It was disgusting.

PhilippaMaQuentePhilippaMaQuenteover 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks so much! This story will be expanded now that the contest is over.

Corpse_riderCorpse_riderover 3 years ago
Great writing

Great writing and no holding back when it came to Elenore's ravishing. I loved the contrast in the mundane opening of the story to the wild intense over the top depictions of sex with the demonic entity.

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