All Comments on 'He Made an Offer I Couldn't Refuse'

blond blue

You were able to create a very intense atmosphere that built steadily through out the page. I'm excited to see how it pays off in the next chapter.

I love the very subtle gestures that really help to build the tension, such as "He was only mildly surprised when I put my hand in his as we walked the three blocks back to the office."

I love these stories of nervous exploration and surrender.