All Comments on 'He Planned a Secret Ch. 03'

I would like it if theres's one more.

fabuless job! looking for next chapter, you can't stop here?

Thank you - I have to say it is nice to see the full spectrum of feelings, in balance - 2 snipers and the humanity they maintain along with the deliberate nature of the actions they need to take.

I do have one "however" - Almond was a field operative - she might be qualified on a SASS but there should have been 3 9's and she would have been as reactive as the men - one would think -

Other than that the balance of traits was nicely handled - and I was glad none of the important people were lost -

Thank you sir -

but in my review of the series to date I am wondering what became of Diane's daughter Barb. It would seem to me that Diane would be missing her. Maybe need to explain why there seems to be no concern of the mother for the daughter. Maybe she will somehow reconnect with her later? Also, I would think your characters would include Martha, whom they purchased the restaurant from, as part of the family as you took the time to bring up the point that she seems to have no family that cares for her anymore. I think that you could include how they bring her in to the family and back to the community in you next chapter (hint, hint).

*****

A different type of love story.....wonderful.

I enjoyed your story. Every time I visit your page, I read and enjoy. Hope to see something new sometime.

Loved it! Thanks for sharing your story!

I have read this story at least 3 times in the past few years! Still a fantastic story.

thanks

Awesome!

You left Diane's Daughter behind, alone, hurting and vulnerable. Go rescue her in another story!

EXCELLENT !

THANK YOU !

How could they abandon Martha who only wanted to continue serving people foo?