All Comments on 'Head Nurse'

by fireandlace0533

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Reggie2xxReggie2xxalmost 4 years ago
Nice I like where this might be going

I’m sure hoping for part two to hear how everyone is doing the two girls working together, does she get in bed with her new partner. Does Justine finally get more of Zach’s cock as a bottom.

69stroker6969stroker69almost 4 years ago

great story. Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Head Nurse

Great build up. Can't wait to find out what happens; lots of sex and gallons of cum, I hope!

greystongreystonalmost 4 years ago
Interesting characters

Bit of a slow start but your characters are personality wise well developed. I very much enjoyed reading this and hope you will continue the story. Now that the "cum dam" has been burst I would expect more frequent explosions.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Fantastic

Brilliant pace and tone. Would love more details about his dick - size - make it big! Can’t wait for more. So much potential here! Officially a fan.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Head nurse

A good ending so far, I hope there's more to this story in the pipeline if you pardon the pun.

It would certainly be good if justin gets fucked, and as well anne perhaps gets a 3some or maybe 4some if she and her new work partner join forces 😉

fd8984596fd8984596almost 4 years ago

What a hot well written 1st post!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Superb

Had me on edge all the way through

CuriousPeteCuriousPeteover 3 years ago

Great story & very hot at the end

It was a bit slow developing but really loved the sex when they got around to it. Don't particularly like the superior attitude of the firemen but enjoyed the repartee between Justine & Anne. Look for lots more hot sex in following chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Damn Hot!

This story was so hot. I kept picturing Zach as an Ed Quin look alike. (He plays the president on Tyler Perry’s The Oval).

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Long time reader, new author. Prefer longer stories with character background. Hoping to write stories in multiple categories.

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