All Comments on 'Headstrong Ch. 01'

Fantastic read for your first story and I hope you will write more especially of these two. Please don't bring dad in to the mix. doing that would ruin the story.

I love this first story you wrote, and I like where it is going, just whatever you do, do NOT ruin it by bringing the dad in as well...

forget the stupid mom angle. pursue the bro /sis for long term, marriage and kids they will be awesome for a developed story. hate when the stories include dad or mom (just plain gross). siblings only and hot, hot,hot.

Love the story,can't wait for chapter 2

Kim will be very jealous of mother and brother already included, and Dad angry if not included.

What a fantastic story. Looking forward to the next part

Wow luved your story...that's the real world brothers abd sisters fucking.oh my what a surprise. Lol..not gonna tell you what to do with next one.you did great with first..

One of the best reads ever! Pacing, development, point of view, all around good writing, and of course very sexy. Thanks for this, I am eagerly awaiting future stories from you.

Superbly written. Very hard to believe this was your fist story. 5/5

The story was good...until the last 2 paragraphs. Getting the parents involved ALWAYS ruins the story. Should've kept it to just the brother and sister. 1*

I loved this! I don't care if mom and dad are brought in. Can't wait to hear what happen when sis went shopping and caught mom and brother, and how it happen.

Suck.