by dragontatto
I loved the budding story of Charles and Katrina in the previous story and I'm so glad you decided to write about them.
I haven't read the other stories with the main characters so I'll need to do that next. I don't really like sci-fi but I like this story so far.
This looks like a story I could really get into. I can't wait for the next installment. THanks.
can hardly wait to find out what happens next KEEP IT UP.
I thought, after the first series, how can it get any better, but I think it just might. I cant wait to see how johnatan helps pati
I love these stories! This one is so exciting! Who knew that kat's powers were stronger than before!! I just cant wait for the next chapter!! Thanks again!
I've really enjoyed reading your stories so far. They have been fantastic and I can't wait to keep reading. I sincerely hope you keep writing them!
"he's leery of her" i think you mean "wary" and "that i have no doubt" should be "of that i have no doubt" ..... get someone to proof read it or something i find it disrupts the story which has a good plot by the looks of things.
This seems more silly than Edgar Rice Burroughs' Barsoom stories, without the action or heroism.
More of a solid flow of thought. Still missing a ton of background and character details.
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Anonymous, you're missing character and background details because this is a sequel. You can find the first book in the series for free if you do a google search for it. Instead of bitching, get off your lazy ass and look at the author's profile, use your brain, if you have one, and put two and two together. Your incessant whining is annoying.