by Homophilic_LadyJ
The standard of your writing suggests that you've got it in you to become a welcome addition to this site. And in 'Bloodlands' I think you've created a fantasy milieu which could lend itself to a series, not necessarily with Emma and Sarah or their time period but with other characters and times. Think about it and good luck.
I loved this story. I hope to see more of Emma and Sarah, or any other stories you might write. 5*
A very good and well written story. I really enjoy stories in different time periods. This has a lot of potential for a series. I hope to see a lot more from you.
Always a sucker for a love story with a happy ending, especially when it has such an original plot and is so well written!
Eagerly looking forward to your next submission.
A most enjoyable read. Beautifully written with great characters a captivating story line and great sex . what more could a girl ask for.
Stroudle said everything that I was thinking and phrased it perfectly. Nothing more need be said other than my own words imploring you to continue writing.
I enyoyed your prose. You made a believable fantasy world and your characters are like part of a faerie tale book. Good job!
I enjoyed this so much, the realistic nature of the story pulled me in and the sprinkle of magic was perfect!! Emma and Sara, this is an amazing love story. Thank you.
i am also a huge sucker for a romantic happy ending. i stayed up really late to read all of this , 5am now - at work by 8am ( i hope !! ) . much love from me - sarah
Wow... excellent, excellent, excellent.
I enjoy historical fiction. I enjoy romance. I enjoy tales in which people ignore conventional norms and follow their hearts.
My pulse quickened as they raced along the river, my imagination lusted during their passionate exploration and my heart ached with joy as the story ended.
Thank you for sharing your talent and imagination. You are gifted.
Wow! I can't believe I've only just discovered this story. It was absolutely amazing! The characters were made for each other. Thank you, this is definitely 5 stars from me ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
What is it, a bug a filthy bug in the male humans DNA, fighting killing war ...... Since thousands of years and the did we ever drew a line to stop this perverted actions ..... No ...... We have wars actually just around the globe and fighting killing ......l this is sick weird perversity
Hopefully we will have some more like Sarah, some leaders feets down to earth and clear thoughts about a social network
Thank you for this lovingly tale
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