by R410a
A beautiful story. I liked the flow and the characters. I like stories that have broken people find themselves and that key that makes their life so much better. I have seen that happen in my job and it is fulfilling to say the least. I have enjoyed your other stories also. Thanks for your time and imagination.
A bit on the boring side but still a decent heartwarming story
Are my favorite. People are beautiful in different ways. The love of my life was very plain in reality, but with her sense of humor, quick wit, loving nature, and fierce ethics she was my miss universe. Its a beautiful story and I thank you for it. 5
Thank you for this one!!!!!
Dear Author, Sweet, well written story of unlikely strangers finding love. Truly enjoyed this, will continue reading your submissions and awarded this one a five * rating. Thank you for the pleasant journey through the story. jntiques/john
Well, I hate to be repetitious, but when a story is great, I have to tell it like it is. This story wasn't just great, it told three courters with no sex. just the kindness of people to those that can't otherwise make it. Then as fillings between the main characters continued to grow. They took it slowly till near the end; the sexual part of the story finally appeared. Well done.
I enjoyed the story telling throughout. Even when the sex was there, it was done slowly.
I cannot say it enough , i just enjoy your style of writing please continue .
As always thankyou for your time given to writing for your readers pleasure .
As I work my way through your stories, I am always delighted with your writing. While you stated this story originated from a request, I felt this was more like something you might have lived, not just created. Very enjoyable. I felt I was tuned into both characters very well. I will always enjoy reading something written this well.