All Comments on 'Heart and Mind'

the chinese symbol for trouble = 2 women under 1 roof.

so he has 2 wifes each with 2 of his kids so far.

(huh, i thought Lisa would join in so he would have 3 wife harem.)

the story seemed a little stiff, and parts moved a bit fast. on the other hand the POV dividers were a bit nice - made it easier to segue.

(what is it about spies/special ops and polygamy stories? this is the 3rd spy/spec op story i read this week that ended in polygamy! 007 only ever had 1 wife! but he was English.....)

Although i normally read bdsm type things i really loved this story...i would love to see what you have to come up with on something like that...please continue to write and entertain your fans. a fan in Texas...