All Comments on 'Heart-Bound Ch. 01'

Great start! Looking forward to the next chapter

Great start! Good cliff-hanger, ready to read the next part.

Thanks!

Thank you all so much for reading! Don't forget to like and subscribe! LOL. That's a joke, but seriously I've already submitted Chapter 2 for review and I'm hard at work on the upcoming chapters this morning.

Have a great day.

Sincerely,

Bound_Vixen

Pros

Good tease for the next chapter.

The Mistress was commanding.

Looking forward to chapter 2.

Cons

Characters needed better descriptions.

Too short.

A piece of advice I got awhile back is chapters should be as long as they need to be. Later chapters are a bit longer in this story, so while I'm sorry you felt it was short I do stand by it. You do hope you find the later chapters more to your liking length-wise.

A piece of advice I got awhile back is chapters should be as long as they need to be. Later chapters are a bit longer in this story, so while I'm sorry you felt it was short I do stand by it. I do hope you find the later chapters more to your liking length-wise.