All Comments on 'Heart Is Where the Home Is Ch. 05'

Great ending!

5

Brilliant conclusion, thank you for a great story with some really fun characters. I look forward to reading what happens to some of the others in the future.

Written like only a master story teller can! Truly enjoyed this episode and look forward to the promised future offerings.

Cheers

SAGE

5 Stars.

Please keep going. There are lots of tales here.

Thank you.

Outstanding!🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

EXCELLENT 5 STAR STORY! THANK YOU Bh76.

Great read look forward to a Mel story but I'm definitely looking forward to more Lainey and Kinsey. Keep them coming.

Great story. Might you come back to it at a later date? Looking forward to the next series with Mel. 5 stars

Excellent. Such an enjoyable read. I agree with those below... next series with Mel will be welcomed. Thank-you

You write an excellent story, I've read a great deal of your work. Please, by all means continue.

Excellent stories. It would have been nice to hear a little more about their post wedding life, but still great. I do think she should have found the time to tell Ken she was pregnant before announcing it to all, but...

I sense an ending yet the story arc isn't complete. Now it's on the the story you recently posted, that I guess, is in this universe...5*

My second time through, I read it again after reading the first chapters of your sequel "Living in the shadows". I hope you keep writing about theses characters as there seems to be many different ways to branch off.

All 5 chapter were rates 5 BIG FAT SHINY STARS!

Lainey is a farm bitch!! These relationships where friends and family no things before a spouse is fucking pathetic

Dressed in white? Comical. A shit-stained red hooker outfit would have been more appropriate for this fucked up couple.

Great story. I would like to read more about them.

A very good story.

⭐⭐⭐⭐

Waited to the end b4 commenting. Wanted to see the end. Ok 5 stars great story i really hope theres more with these characters.

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Ecellente Series!

11/10!!!!!

Just wonderful! I can see you lining up a future story with Mel and Jim’s younger brother, along with Jen and Cindy making a go of the business, tbh that ought to be expanded to a country club or clinic (read Celeb detox) to ensure success and more storylines.

Many thanks for both writing and posting, Cheers, Ppfzz.

Lots of fun here. Thanks.

Great story...

Two highest suicide rates in the world are transexuals and homosexuals. Stupid crap like this is just encouraging these mentally ill people to kill themselves. Zero stars for this trash.

Nice story! I gave it three 4-stars and two 5-stars across the whole tale.

I have to say, I'm honestly baffled by some of the ridiculous Anon comments. Did they even read the story?