All Comments on 'Heat of the Night Pt. 03'

by Shaima32

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MaonaighMaonaighabout 5 years ago
What can I say?

There is always so much to enjoy in your tales, Shaima, situations, turns of phrase, people. Can't get enough of them. As for encounters with an eight-legged passion killer...(I'd sooner face a rapid wolf than an Aussie spider---at least the wolf might understand commands like: "Down, boy!" or "Sit!"). Two of life's great truths emerge in this chapter: 1. Beware of friends who come bearing well-meaning advice (...it's just a phase...); and 2. Cold toilet seats have a way of snapping you back to reality. Yet another five stars (soon be running out of them).

HiddenInTheOpenHiddenInTheOpenabout 5 years ago
Still loving it!

This story keeps getting better and better! I can't wait for chapter 4. Thank you for sharing this with us!

Cindy1001Cindy1001about 5 years ago
Why?

Why do your stories always grab my by the throat at the most unexpected moments? This time the conversation between Lisa and her mum at the mall had me crying. I can only surmise that it's your talent to lay out and narrate a very believable story, characters, passions and feelings.

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