All Comments on 'Heather Babysits'

Virgins don't finger-bang themselves and remain intact for 'giving their cherry to a real man.' If you had ever actually had sex, you might know that and not feed us this bullshit.

And his son wanders into the room, “Daddy what are you and my babysitter doing?” ☺️

Tom is a widower, not a widow.

Please...you write like a 14 year old boy. Spare us this drivel.

Heather needs to make Tom a father.

This story has been published here hundreds of times - some versions were worse (not many) - most were just average like this one (although this one was pretty close to the bottom of average) and a very few were 4s or 5s and most of them were Ashson's fairy tales.

Pay Attention!!! Her arms collapse, tilting her hips up...She is panting into the mattress. This is called Doggy Style sex, so with her Rosebud at the top, how would his cum flow down to tickle it? Proofread your work, and it will get better.

Really liked hope there’s a chapter 2

I like the girl next door+widower+babysitter-angle but she's much too forward for the virgin-thing to work out.

Iron out the quirks and try to keep track of your characters movements then this can work.