All Comments on 'Heather Falls in Love Pt. 01'

I love Heather so much!

There were (sadly) never any Heathers when I was at Uni......

Hurry up for Part the Second....

Affectionately and gratefully

Corinne xxxx

I'm glad you like her. And maybe you went to the wrong uni :)

Pt. 02 is complete and being edited/revised right now. It should appear on Literotica within a few days.

This is going to be a good series as well only one thing through the ending when Rachael told Her to stop and she just kept going, in my opinion if a girl says stop or that is enough she should have stopped then and not keep going but still in all a good first story

Hi Jenorma

I agree 100% about stopping when a girl says no. Trust me, though, Rachael didn't really want Hev to quit. Her true wishes are touched upon in pt. 02, and stopping isn't included.

I did get that feeling when racheal told her to stop and hev did not I did not think she really meant for hev to stop, but can't wait till part 2

I plan to do my final edit and submit pt. 02 today. It should appear on Literotica by Monday.

Quile the interesting series. Looking forward to these adventures.

I'm glad you find them interesting. Pt. 5 of HFIL should be visible in a day or so with the concluding Pt. 06 following shortly.

If you have only just "discovered" Heather, try the Heather's Busy Week series on Literotica. She is a little younger in that but as precocious as ever!

And I see that Jenorma is still around looking for things to complain about. There are some people out her that just like to have it rough sometimes and there is nothing wrong with pain. Like General Patton (I know google him). "The great thing about pain is that it let's you know that you are still alive". Same thing could be said about rough sex with or without pain. It makes you feel alive!

Thank you for enjoying the story. I enjoyed writing it and the characters seemed to enjoy the sex!!

Great username, by the way.

Good start to this new story. Just one comment - I particularly liked Chapter 5, but I was hoping Heather would find out how many tattoos and piercings, Rachel had and where they were. Perhaps she did but isn't telling us.

D Ellerbeck