All Comments on 'Heather Learns to Drive a Stick'

Very poorly written

I can tell this is your first story attempt. It was a good story line, but more time is needed to develop more plot and story line. There was good potential just needs a little more development

Good start on the story but quickly fell apart.

Terrible English, needed to be spell checked and proof read. Even after that it wouldn't be very good. The daughter is not a believable character and the father is an ignorant sadistic rapist. The whole story turns you off sex, love and men, particularly fathers with daughters.

Don't do any more.

Excellent father-daughter incest story. I read the story to have the pleasure of reading about a father fucking his daughter. That was the story you wrote. My cock got hard. That's what I wanted. I jacked off and enjoyed it very much.

Mission accomplished. Thank you.

I loved it. Got my pussy wet and wild. I love stories that explore the taboo. Not many can keep up with my unique needs...

gonna be a sequel where she gets pregnant?

Thanks for posting but I feel like their relationship wasn't really well defined. First I thought she was his sweet beautiful little girl, then he is all the sudden treating her like a whore and raping her. He takes her virginity with no foreplay or seduction and hurts her without a hint of what is coming and she likes it? No talk or foreplay is unrealistic. The story didn't really do it for me. Sorry:(