All Comments on 'Heather's Busy Week Pt. 04'

i really could not get into this one, after hev and Alex mother got together i just lost interest in where this story was going it was around page 3, if a story lasts longer than 3-4 pages i start losing interest i might try and read it again

What can I say! I'm long-winded. I value you as a critic, though . . . you've been great this far. Please don't stop reading before the policewoman gets her handcuffs out!

As I said I finished reading it, i though it was pretty good, and with the policewoman and hev that kept coming onto her, hev should be careful what she wishes for, but i was wondering is Gill a new girl, i do not remember her in your other parts, can't wait for the next part

Thank you for persevering.

Gill was in Pt 01. She is the lady cricketer who "entertained" Hev in the back seat of her car (while Hev was avoiding Ross).

i guess i should reread these again, just to know who everyone is lol

Your writing is amazing and your storytelling is way off the charts. Make the next chapter about DC Parker please

Go on, read 'em again. You know you want to.

Believe it or not, DC Parker features rather prominently in Pt. 05. Make that very prominently . . .

When is part 5 coming out?

I'm going to submit tomorrow morning (say 12 GMT). It should be there to view say Tues/Wes.

Hope you enjoy it. It's my favourite part so far . . .

Firstly, thank you for the advice about half crowns (2/6d). I may have a few lurking around still. I also remember crowns (5/-) especially commemorative one - Coronation (1953), Winston Churchill (1965) and Silver Jubilee (1977). Sadly, due to inflation a crown would be worth very little now and we didn't have one for the Platinum Jubilee.

Moving on to the cricket - I like to match report at the end of the chapter. It doesn't say what the final score was, although looking at Chapter 5, which I shall read next, I assume play resumes in the morning. Where will the next match be - Lords, Oval or Headingley. I am sure with a performance like Gill and Heather gave in this chapter, there would be a sell out crowd at any of these venues.

DEllerbeck

I am reading through the series again. Picking up on several bits I either missed or had forgotten since I read first time.

D Ellerbeck