All Comments on 'Heather's Revenge'

Stories like this are a complete waste of time - easily forgettable

Thus may be an erotic story. But u am finding it wholesome. And something i would do if i were in the position

Very good but take your time.

I'm loving this vibe, men being objectified and embarrassed and put in scenarios where they are humiliated. I hope to read more of this, maybe the waiters being exposed to relatives, ex's or former classmates they used to bully. Keep up the good work.

Talk about your pathetic fantasies. The writing was okay but the content was boring and mostly annoying.

good story for boys learning their place

Great story. I love it when men are humiliated and put in their place. She really took him to the cleaners and permanently humiliated him1

Well, I love the premise but the execution left a lot to be desired. He falls in love too quickly and gets married after one date and roll in the hay? The takeover of the company was also too quickly done and there was no finesse. There really was no character development and nothing really about the Cottontail restaurant. Yeah, he was a bully but again there was no real bullying except name calling and such light stuff against Heather.

WTF does Ryan have to loose his life is ruined and over, he needs to just get a gun and take his sister and his ex-wife out in to the Forest and have them dig one big grave for both of them to lay in, then Execute both of them. Now he can retake over the CEO Position again. What did he have to loose anyway, it was the choice. That's what I would do..