All Comments on 'Heather's Revenge'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
The end doesn't make sense

Yeah, I know these is supposed to be fantasy, but that does NOT mean logic can be discarded. Nancy knows. Glenda knows. That can -- should -- mean real trouble for Heather & Mark, at least as far as a divorce settlement is concerned.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

There was so much written that DIDN'T need to be there and then ending it like that?! 1*

cantbuymycantbuymyabout 11 years ago

People watch Star Trek and mission impossible and say shit like the ending is not reasonable. Bull shit - it was hot! Most states are no fault so this means nothing as a 5 year marriage will get the new wife little. Good seduction 5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Legal crap

Holy crap! Why are we going on and on about legal shit? This story was meant to be entertaining, not dissected by lawyers. Can't we just enjoy a good story? 5 stars for me! It was entertaining and well written. Enough said. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

loved it my daughter read this with me and she went right to my cock sucked me good then said deposit your cum in my cunt daddy...i did.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
She can join me under the covers

She can wrap her mouth around my cock under the covers any night! This dad-daughter interaction is hot.

vapourmanvapourmanover 8 years ago
size

Very sexy, more please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
suck me, Heather

I shot my load at "I'm horny-girl-care-bear today." So filthy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Crap ending. Bitch Nancy will get off easy for seducing the wimp man and destroying his marriage. INQUISITIVE BITCH NEIGHBOUR

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[13.11.22]

Well done!

11/10!!!!!

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