All Comments on 'Heating Up the Hot Tub Ch. 03'

by Tall_Cool_Guy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Oh god, I'm in love

this is great... don't let the next episode be so long in delivery...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Too short!!

Did I mention that this chapter is too short?

David48David48over 13 years ago
Ah...

...a mutual admiration thing for sure...How touching...I just like the horn dog parts myself...Ken and the Barbies...It's good to be King of the hottub...LOL!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Desperately seeking..... continuation!

Okay - you've teased and teased, now please, please, please write the next chapter.

In fact, the chapters are all too short and would benefit from merging into a single multi-page chapter.

Now, what happens next? Does Daddy knock up his little harem? Does his little harem procure more members for Daddy's (and their) benefit?

Enquiring minds want to know.

mr4eva81mr4eva81about 3 years ago

You should keep going i real enjoyd

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well, it has been a while since you wrote this story and everyone would like another chapter or more. If you are not retired, do you think you could write some more to it. This is a really good story....very hot and stimulating. We all want more more more more...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

If Anonymous ("Well, it's been a while...") had simply clicked on the author's pen name (Tall_Cool_Guy) they would have saw that this 3 chapters was written in 2005. The only story this author wrote. So I wouldn't get my hopes up for a continuation.

PereNoellPereNoell7 months ago

After all 3 in a row you had me real close just from the stories

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