All Comments on 'Heavenly Father, Earthy Father'

by StrawberryShortcake1012

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AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 8 years ago
Father

Daughter sex can be hot, But not when it's Rape!

Epiphany_JonesEpiphany_Jonesover 8 years ago
Your stories are kind of ...pretty much the same thing, over and over.

It's one thing to have a niche, it's another to be in a rut. And that might be the reason I can see the chronology of your stories without needing to refer to the submission dates: all I need to do is see the highest score and follow it to the lowest score. (That means your scores are steadily dropping, if I didn't make myself clear.)

thebug37thebug37over 8 years ago
Ameen

which means something to the effect, 'So be it' and the master was rewarded with his daughters cherry. . .is that so be it? Nice writing.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Mmmmm yes! This is such a good story! I wish my preacher daddy would have fucked me!

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