All Comments on 'Heir to the Throne'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Oh, please, don’t make us wait the full year. 😉

Tc

5*, more if I could.

jpz007ahrenjpz007ahrenalmost 3 years ago

Powerful and beautiful story. Hellavu debut. I hope there is inspiration for you to continue this lovely tale, for it would be ever so nice to learn his name. Though if that's not in the cards, so be it.

Looking forward to more, but regardless, thank you for your story. You and yours Be well.

IlfenIlfenalmost 3 years ago

A very intriguing premise. It would be a prosperous queendom indeed if the queens all had this ability.

s0rethr0ats0rethr0atalmost 3 years ago

Can't wait to read the next chapter, if, hopefully, there is one. And also, thanks for the mention, I loved editing for you and helping.

longtermsub1994longtermsub1994almost 3 years ago

Beautiful! Wouldn't be too bad to have a sequel

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Can't wait for the next chapter!

FlynnTaggartFlynnTaggartalmost 3 years ago

Hopefully there is another chapter with a happy ending after an appropriate amount of gentle femdom on our nameless knight.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Loved the writing! Perfect amount of smut, fantasy, world-building and a hint of romance. Definitely a cliffhanger to see if this knight will end up marrying her!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great story. Hope there's more.

Padre33Padre33over 1 year ago

Can't wait for more.

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New erotica writer. I like to read and write about all different kinds of people in all different kinds of situations. I just take little fantasies I've had and see if I can turn them into stories. *I plan on continuing Heir to the Throne at some point, but will probably post...

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