All Comments on 'Helen'

by chthonicpleasures

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Wow. Just Wow! Starts slowly but builds to something amazing.

I really LOVE this story. He's eighteen and she's sixty three and it feels so real and by the end the sex is hot and raw and nasty and right.

kalodinkalodinalmost 6 years ago
That should have been a 5

For originality alone. Elegant, kinky.

I had a Helen in my childhood days. She was my stepmom and a former test pilot for a broom company.

wetwetwomanwetwetwomanalmost 6 years ago
Hot beautiful wild wet sizzling kinky and deeply moving!!!

Oh my! PERFECT! You just took my breath way!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
nice

your story is so well written, you have an incredible talent !

can't wait to read more of your work

carrie

ROBERTODAVOROBERTODAVOalmost 6 years ago
A Wonderful Story!

What a magnificent story. So well written and so believable. You have a superb writing style! I look forward to reading more of your work.

Robertodavo aka Robert Davidson.

Maeve31Maeve31over 5 years ago
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This is, I believe, truly a favorite for me...it is so beautiful and captivating! 💜

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Turned me on, made me cry, turned me on again.

Damn, this story achieves the nearly impossible feat of both being sexy as hell and subtle, believable and emotionally meaningful. Never before has a story made me both jerk off (repeatedly) and cry and for the best of reasons.

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