by chthonicpleasures
I really LOVE this story. He's eighteen and she's sixty three and it feels so real and by the end the sex is hot and raw and nasty and right.
For originality alone. Elegant, kinky.
I had a Helen in my childhood days. She was my stepmom and a former test pilot for a broom company.
Oh my! PERFECT! You just took my breath way!
your story is so well written, you have an incredible talent !
can't wait to read more of your work
carrie
What a magnificent story. So well written and so believable. You have a superb writing style! I look forward to reading more of your work.
Robertodavo aka Robert Davidson.
This is, I believe, truly a favorite for me...it is so beautiful and captivating! 💜
Damn, this story achieves the nearly impossible feat of both being sexy as hell and subtle, believable and emotionally meaningful. Never before has a story made me both jerk off (repeatedly) and cry and for the best of reasons.