All Comments on 'Helen, My Second MILF'

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BobbyChocolatBobbyChocolatalmost 3 years ago

Pretty good overall and I definitely enjoyed it.

However the phrase she purred was overused.

wwaldripwwaldrip4 months ago

Excellent story really enjoyed it

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Been suffering a bit of writer's block lately. I think I've overcome that, at least for the moment as I just submitted my third work in a little over a week. "Molly" was a story I'd been working on for over two years and the newest one "Irresistible Force" nearly as long. Sti...