All Comments on 'Helena's Hero Ch. 03'

Another excellent continuation of this great series. I really enjoyed seeing Jonah and Helena hanging out and enjoying each other's company, as it gives the hot sex scenes time to breathe, as it were. I also liked how you used that down time as an opportunity to introduce Helena's two friends, especially Hannah. You really are quite good at seeding your story with more ways to grow, and I imagine this particular avenue will be very fruitful in the near future, if I'm reading it right ;) Looking forward to more sexy situations from you, and thanks again for writing!

I truly enjoy how you are weaving their friendship in with fullfilling their sexual pleasures. Looking forward to Saturday night's wild session and Helena's Sunday!

you're good 5

however; for myself, I don't like the idea of Helena saying "go for it" during the weekend, I'd have to walk out right then. I kind of get the idea she might have her friends over on "her time", another no-no for me. I'd want my own time with her; after the weekend is over, then m-a-y-b-e additional input. but then of course; I wouldn't except "hero sex" in the first place. I have too much respect for myself; as well as others for that.

Why would anyone spend that much time getting to know each other; while under the assumption that it all ends Sunday afternoon ... Not my kind of a fantasy. I'd want the real thing, long-term ...DKP

Really enjoying...your writing experience shows.

The writing is excellent the two lovers just jump off of the pages at you. The thing it's not all about the sexual part it's about them really getting to know each other and it's not owed sex because he came to her rescue but social status not age I fell will doom them from anymore than lovers a fling on her part and feelings on his. I am afraid someone may be hurt deeply. Just my thoughts hope that I am wrong.

Ron/ cowboyridecc@yahoo.com

Still going strong.