All Comments on 'Helldancer'

I was so excited to see an update to this story! I remember when I first read part 1 I would check daily for updates. Part 2 was worth waiting for and I hope to see a part 3, 4, 5 and so on! Sorry that I am being greedy and asking for much but I genuinely enjoy this story. Keep up the good work!

I've. waited so long for an update and this just served to whet my appetite for more. I can't wait for the next chapter

i would like for you to continue this story

please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good story, well written, both technically and in story development. Thanks, Kindasortacrazy, but NicelyDevelopingEroticaWriter!

your readers need more pronto!!!!!! this is one of the best stories iv read so far

Great sequel, more more more! (Please)

hot, wher can I find one.

That was the very best that I have read. I love both of them.

something new and worthy to read!! Literotica has been missing this type of awesome story for a long time!!

The only thing that is wrong is the placement of the hymen; it's actually placed at the entrance to the vagina, you can see it simply by spreading the labia. But lots of people get that wrong, so it's somewhat of a nit-pick... Though I wonder what they would have done if she had been born without a hymen, or it had been ripped by bike riding or something...

Other than that, this story is perfect. It's actually my second time reading. :D

Such a good story love the characters!