All Comments on 'Hello Dahlia Ch. 01'

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fridayamfridayamalmost 14 years ago
I really enjoyed this

The characters are so believable and the setting so well described. I look forward to reading more.

gaesmogaesmoalmost 14 years ago
Good

Looking forward to the next installment. I don't much like cheating wives, or husbands, but you are putting together a good storyline. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Good Start

Hope you plan on Following up and letting everyone know what becomes of the two Lovers.

Does she leave hubby?

do they make it together and what of her Son?

r_d_txnr_d_txnalmost 14 years ago
Very Good

I am always a sucker for stories involving finding true love and this one of the best....

I also am looking forward to the next installment, and to discover the future of these lovers...

bims66bims66almost 14 years ago
GOOD STORY

Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Good Start!

Like it very much so far, keep going.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy8 months ago

Good beginning!

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