All Comments on 'Hello Dr. Dreamy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
BULLSHIT--------Don't people get tired of

re-writing the same bull-shit plot over and over again

This must be the two thousand-th version of this story

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great story

I'm glad ur back and i loved ur story

Wahoos1000Wahoos1000over 17 years ago
WOW

Very well written...... very erotic and very arrousing. You are a very talented writer and I look forward to your next great story.

PS - isn't it amazing how the idiots are always anonymous? LOL

scriptordelectoscriptordelectoover 17 years ago
Sexy and fun!

This was a great little erotic tale with a rather satisfying twist. I loved it!

NookiehunterNookiehunterover 17 years ago
Exciting Husband & Wife Sex!

As always, your stories are great. This is exciting husband & wife sex carried on in a way that kept the reader in the dark about the relationship of the doctor and patient until the very end. Very, very good!

Nookiehunter

ohioohioover 17 years ago
wonderful surprise!

nicely done--fun story!

ohio

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Well Written Cliche

Well written but I have to agree with the first commenter. He was unnecessarily rude but he is correct in his observation that the "sex with a stranger who turns out to be a spouse" plot-line has become a staple here of late. I anticipated the "surprize twist" ending by the midpoint of the story. A writer of your caliber should aspire to more original plot devices.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Good

Not a crime in rehashing familiar plots. The execution is the important factor. Your longer stories are very good but they take time to write.

Boyd

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Great Work

Hahahaha! Great job! Very well written story, nice build-up, great twist at the end. Very hot...lil role playing never hurts! =)

bellaballandabellaballandaover 17 years ago
Wonderful Read

Great story. I really like your longer stories but I totally understand what the last year of university is like. I love the twist at the end... makes us remember that there can still be wonderful sex *within* a marriage.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
made me quake...

thank you for that - it was beautiful

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
very good!

Very well done, i really enjoyed your story. great twist at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
VERY HOT!!!

You certainly did NOT disappoint!!!

Can't wait to check out your other stories!

janiexxjaniexxover 17 years ago
Phew!!

What a fantastic story and I loved the ending! Extremely satisfying in every way.

janiexx

fregenfregenabout 17 years ago
Great Job!

Well written. Well done. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
HOTT

Gyno stories are always hot, thank you for such a great story--

zex95966zex95966over 15 years ago
I know you can't improve

because it's already the best.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
fabulous

What an enjoyable story! Loved the accuracy and the surprise ending!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
My first GYN erotica (grin)

Cute, I've never had an OB or GYN appointment, but I am acquainted with a few OB/YN Doctors. They all seem appropriately staid and stogy, so I was expecting a harlequin type fantasy. Aside from the unbelievable ploy used to get rid of the chaperon, you sucked me right in (grin), so I was delighted with the twist at the end.

-- srgeek --

sweetfatimasweetfatimaabout 14 years ago
it was totally cute!!!i love it.

I was surprised a t first i was like shes a whore but i loved that it was her husband!!!aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww

canndcanndalmost 14 years ago
Very hot...

That was very hot. It was also cute at the end when you find out it is her husband. Too bad we all don't have one of those at home.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
hot, cute ending

didn't see that coming

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Love this story

This is one of my favorite stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
LOVED IT, the ending was absolutely adorable.

The story was incredibly hot and the happy ending just made me go aww, this was BRILLIANT.

Thank you so much :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Excellent

That was excellently written...big grin!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Nice. Write a sequel, please. Nice touch with the red dress. Hot.

MistressMissy08MistressMissy08over 3 years ago

This story was bloody BRILLIANT! had me on baited breath the whole time. very well don. Bravo!

maleficent05maleficent05about 2 months ago

Fudge! Well-written! The plot twist, just wooow

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