by haremgirl
re-writing the same bull-shit plot over and over again
This must be the two thousand-th version of this story
Very well written...... very erotic and very arrousing. You are a very talented writer and I look forward to your next great story.
PS - isn't it amazing how the idiots are always anonymous? LOL
This was a great little erotic tale with a rather satisfying twist. I loved it!
As always, your stories are great. This is exciting husband & wife sex carried on in a way that kept the reader in the dark about the relationship of the doctor and patient until the very end. Very, very good!
Nookiehunter
Well written but I have to agree with the first commenter. He was unnecessarily rude but he is correct in his observation that the "sex with a stranger who turns out to be a spouse" plot-line has become a staple here of late. I anticipated the "surprize twist" ending by the midpoint of the story. A writer of your caliber should aspire to more original plot devices.
Not a crime in rehashing familiar plots. The execution is the important factor. Your longer stories are very good but they take time to write.
Boyd
Hahahaha! Great job! Very well written story, nice build-up, great twist at the end. Very hot...lil role playing never hurts! =)
Great story. I really like your longer stories but I totally understand what the last year of university is like. I love the twist at the end... makes us remember that there can still be wonderful sex *within* a marriage.
Very well done, i really enjoyed your story. great twist at the end.
You certainly did NOT disappoint!!!
Can't wait to check out your other stories!
What a fantastic story and I loved the ending! Extremely satisfying in every way.
janiexx
What an enjoyable story! Loved the accuracy and the surprise ending!
Cute, I've never had an OB or GYN appointment, but I am acquainted with a few OB/YN Doctors. They all seem appropriately staid and stogy, so I was expecting a harlequin type fantasy. Aside from the unbelievable ploy used to get rid of the chaperon, you sucked me right in (grin), so I was delighted with the twist at the end.
-- srgeek --
I was surprised a t first i was like shes a whore but i loved that it was her husband!!!aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww
That was very hot. It was also cute at the end when you find out it is her husband. Too bad we all don't have one of those at home.
The story was incredibly hot and the happy ending just made me go aww, this was BRILLIANT.
Thank you so much :)
This story was bloody BRILLIANT! had me on baited breath the whole time. very well don. Bravo!