All Comments on 'Hello Mom Pt. 01'

unintenionally funny

Discreetly vs discretely.

Just trying to help.

You are either too young or too old And your story ideas are just too stupid

NOBODY WRITES CRAP BETTER

Please make part 2 soon

So Well Written

THE SON'S CONCERN AND MOTHER'S TAUNTS HAVE BOTH BEEN BEAUTIFULLY PUT DOWN

interesting

Good Start Sir

Somebody GIVE THIS MAN THE AWARD FOR THE WORST AUTHOR

CRAP

F. A. F...... Awful.

I may sue you for copywrite infringement.

I threw up this morning, you stole it and posted it here.

IM LOST FOR WORDS

Saw the text as a script and immediately threw in the towel.

Sorry, simply do not read Literotica.com as a play.

Interesting idea but it just doesn’t work. He said she said he said she said..

Guys.. please do not be toooooo harsh on him. his last many stories have been thrash, the comments, ratings are all negative and he has to be very close to stop writing forever. Let this loser just walk away and let us not buy ourselves the burden of having pushed him into retirement

the comments are the best part of this story

lol

Where is the second part

He has hit a writer’s block some years ago. Is still trying to get out of it by churning out some crap every now and then. Just leave him be. I doubt he is going to get something better than this anytime soon. But he will keep on stubbornly dishing out more of this crap a page a day, just to stay on the scene.

Any child with an attractive mother goes thru this.