All Comments on 'Help from a Friend'

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chytownchytownover 4 years ago
What A Entertaining Read****

I love the storyline. Great sex too! Thanks for sharing.

RodThrustinRodThrustinabout 4 years ago
Wait...who?

A good story, very erotic. It would have been much better if Janet did not suddenly become Kathy, and then Kathy was Kathy and Kathy was also Janet...The name confusion distracted from the story at the most crucial time. It was a 5 if not for that. A little re-reading would avoid that.

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Reading erotica is a passion I have always had. I have a great energy to write stories of fantasies. Hope all will find my writing entertaining as well as stimulating. Please comment on my writing, good, bad or just a note. All criticism is welcome.