by Francisdonatien
... story narrative just flows so nice and easy. Like an excellent slow food meal. Nothing hurried nor crass, but only good ingredients in a carefully prepared tasteful composition. All participants leave the story feeling good about themselves and satisfied.
Wonderfully balanced between pushing the envelope and staying within the possible realm while avoiding creepy or dark territory. It is good as it is.
Though plot offers substantial potential for more: How do they interact when Fred returns from his holiday? Will Alex seemed to like it will she initiate a repeat performance, possibly with some one on one action? Alex was curious about the lovers, will she explore them further? Does she intend to join them?
Can we entice You to write more? Yes, please.