All Comments on 'Helping Hand'

I loved the premise. Very hot story.

Well presented, we'll structured and most realistic.

The speed of heightened passions forced parallels between the two.

One story and 40 followers validate my comments.

Too short. You stopped when Mom walked in.

Sounds like you ended the story and his tend bcause of that.

That's anti-climatic.

Where's Mom in the three some?

Damn, that needs a sequel. Really good for being your first story!

More more more!! Update with a post 2 soon please, I want to see mom join in on the action!

Very nice hot story. 👍👍👍

Don't ruin it with a lame three-way please.

Don't stop now. I'm sure you can get mom involved somehow.

I enjoyed this a lot - your word play and use of description and pacing really came together to let loose what's inside you. I think youll

Stupid keyboard! I think you'll rack up some great stories here.

Best short one ever!

Ooopppsss

Great story, short and hot. Can't wait to get to Chpt 2.